Can someone revise this paragraph' '' In minutes that matter and food that fuels the protagonists are both helpers that made a difference in the world with their thinking skills. The groups also took their activity time to help people with heating homes and donating phones. The difference between the 2 hero groups is one group worked to heat up homes with leftover oil. The other group also worked very hard to donate over 180 million minutes to soldiers! ''

then write another one on how your revision improved you last paragraph (25 points and brainliest to best answer)