Mr. Taylor loved being a crossing guard. He enjoyed laughing and joking with the kids on their way to school. it was only a problem when it was raining out. On rainy days, most of the kids get a ride from their parents, and Mr. Taylor is stuck standing in the rain alone. Change “it was only a problem…” to “It was only a problem…”
Change “Mr. Taylor” to “Mr. taylor.”
Change “parents” to “Parents.”
No changes required.