The bolded section is after the comma

compare the bold sections of both sentences and then answer the question that follows:

original: my father disliked sleet, but my father disliked hail more.
revised: my father disliked sleet, but he hated hail more.

what was done to the bolded section to improve the sentence?
a. a longer phrase was converted to a single word.
b. a modifier that did not add meaning was removed.
c. redundant phrases were eliminated.
d. repetitive words were replaced with synonyms and pronouns.

Best answer gets brainliest and 80 which poem is more effective and why? "on imagination" or "patterns"

Have you ever contributed to “social media outrage” (using your social media accounts to boost the anger about a contemporary issue by forwarding it, liking it, etc.) without stopping to think who might’ve originated the message or what the originator’s motives might’ve been? provide example.

Read the excerpt from suffragists' "great demand" banner. in 1917, more than one thousand women stood before the white house in a cold, pouring rain, holding silent vigil to demand a constitutional amendment to extend the vote to them. their quest to be enfranchised by law was known at the time as the great demand. the smithsonian's great demand banner, as it came to be called, declares in bold words and style the determination of the women who made and carried it. their campaign on behalf of women sought to move america one step closer to fulfilling the nation's long-deferred promise of equality under the law. which statements about this excerpt are correct? check all that apply.