What criticism would most creative writing instructors make of the following passage? "Why are you late?" asked the teacher.
"Because of the huge traffic jam on Broadway," said Fred.
"What traffic jam was that?" queried the teacher.
"The big jam that went from 10th to 35th," stated Fred.
"What traffic jam?" the teacher reiterated. "I was on Broadway just a few minutes ago, and it was wide open."

a
The writer is too worried about repeating words.

b
The dialogue is not realistic.

c
The punctuation marks are used incorrectly.

d
The writer should have used more colorful adjectives and adverbs.