Excerpt from Mrs. Bultfrog Nathaniel Hawthome
* The same morning that Mrs. Balthog and I came together as a unit, we took two seats in the stage-coach and began our
journey towards my place of business. There being no other passengers, we were as much alone and as free to give vent to
our raptures as if I had hired a hack for the matrimonial aunt.
The author is considering changing sentence of paragraph 4 to read
The same moming that is long and I came together and got itched me and her took two seats in the stage couch and
guter une towards y place of Business
The proposed revision would not be good because it
changes the point of view of the passage.
changes the chronological order of events
puts too much emphasis on the fact that they got married
D)
adds informal language that is inconsistent with the passage