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English, 01.12.2020 14:00 loistaylor1819

For this assignment, you will re-write this paragraph. The objective is to join sentences that have a relationship. While all sentences in this paragraph are related to the topic, not all sentences need to be joined. Instead, you will want to keep some simple sentences. Here is the paragraph that needs some revision, and I have highlighted the sentences that should remain as simple sentences My brother Alex has more “interests” than anyone I know. The novelty always wears off very quickly. I know my brother! Last week, Alex wanted to join the school band. He asked if he could rent a drum set. I burst out laughing. My parents just looked at each other. I knew what they were thinking. Would they be able to convince Alex to try something a little quieter? Would he insist on the drums? Well, they convinced Alex to try something else. It wasn’t something quieter. Today he informed us that he’s decided to try the tuba. In fact, the school has an extra tuba. Mom and Dad won’t have to rent one. Needless to say, I hope this novelty wears off very, very, very quickly!

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