Read this excerpt from "Choose Wisely," a literary analysis of The Outsiders. As you read, think about what revisions should be made to make this part of the essay stronger. Some may argue that these three characters have very little room to make positive choices. They are poor, have unstable, even toxic, home lives, and are belittled and discriminated against by the majority of society. This is Ponyboy's view. His attitude is that he and his friends are trapped in this environment with no hope of escape.

What is the BEST way to revise this excerpt?
A) Combine sentences.
B) Include a counterclaim.
C) Add more evidence.
D) Rearrange the sentences.

Read the sentence below about the chicago fire of 1871. schaffer told someone else to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the chicago fire of 1871. which revision is the best example of adding concrete details? schaffer told another person in his office to sound the wrong alarm and that caused a big miscommunication during the chicago fire. schaffer told his assistant to strike the wrong alarm box and that caused a miscommunication during the massive chicago fire of 1871. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342 instead of the correct box and that caused a miscommunication during a fire in chicago. schaffer mistakenly told his assistant to strike alarm box 342, and as a result, firefighters were directed to an incorrect location during the chicago fire of 1871.