Which error in the sentence should be corrected while revising? My friend blogged and I read over his shoulder what he wrote it was good.

A. run-on sentence

B. repetition of ideas

C. unclear meaning

D. wordiness

Run on sentence

Explanation:

He needs punctuation after the I read over his shoulder.  It could potentially be: My friend blogged and I read over his shoulder, what he wrote it was good.

first of all, dante wanted to write an account of the search for spiritual atonement and salvation, and this desire drew heavily from dante's own experiences. dante was living in exile while writing inferno and so, much like his poetic counterpart, he felt like he had lost his way and needed direction.

explanation:

the central idea is basically saying that juveniles that have committed a crime will not have the same consequences as the   adults that have. they will have a softer punishment than what the adults have that is harsh in some ways.