How does the word choice in paragraph 70 contribute to the tone of the passage?

The word choice makes the scene more ominous and threatening or

The word choice makes the Tyrannosaurus seem more threatening than it is (i think is this one, i am not sure).

Explanation:

with whom will you be coming to the party? this is written correctly.

“way of writing” should be replaced with “writing style"

“idea” should be replaced with “purpose.”

maybe   “people from a long time ago” should be replaced with “elizabethans.”