Pls tell me if this poem is right
i wasn't here at school for valentines and i'm making up work and i was supposed to make a love poem
(poem)
Life feels worth living with you around,
You make me laugh even
without a sound.
You make me smile when
my eyes are fill with tears,
You love me like no other
and help me overcome all my fears.
Everyday i spend with you,
teaches me something new.
How you manage to be so perfect,
I really have no clue.
Thank you darling for
entering my life,
I just can't wait to be called your
beloved girlfriend
how does it sound