Directions:   rewrite all of the following sentences, correcting all errors (grammar and punctuation).  some sentences have no errors.

1: he went to the hospital to take a surgery.

2: my mom was hindsight when she remind me..

3: your so extraordinary garden

4: “laura your so obnoxious.”

5: “remarkable” is an antonym for “extraordinary.”  t/f

6: the blunt was in hindsight of the cop.

7: youre so obnoxious chill out

8: face filled with hysterical cheerfulness

9: when i told laura of my intention she had been petrified with unbelief.

10: “implantation” is an antonym for “surgeries.”

11: my sisters friends are obnoxious.

12: a definition for “hysterical” is “based on history.”  t/f

13: a synonym for “hysterical” is “depriving from hysterical and uncontrolled emotions.”  t/f

14: she’s so extraordinary, i never seen anyone like her before.

15: the children in the class were extraordinary smart.

16: she said no! sarcastically.

17: a is not extraordinary b isn’t either.

18: a hysterical woman pounds on his car window and begs for his to find her lost daughter

19: my dog was extraordinary then most dogs

20: i was extraordinary from the other kids.

21: i am petrified of flying which is why i’m driving.

rewrite all 21 and not only 2

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

explanation

old disney was more kid oriented as appose to new disney it's more teen oriented.i guess what i'm trying to say is new disney is way more mature and out there then old disney. for instance all you see in new disney is bf/gf drama and old disney it was nothing like that. kids are growing up and as coorpations like disney, nickolden etc they tend to follow what kids follow so they can have more views . therefore   they have inferred   that now days kids want to have relationships and stuff so that's what disney gives them.

life 2200 right now look pretty good because on how quickly humans are advansing, life will be a breeze. most by by then would have out lawed disese.most wouldn't have to work anymore beacuse everything would be free. the econamy for most countires would be really good, also by then u.s.a would have probably would have expaned its borders.

so that counculeds my thoghts of how 2200 is you for reading

michael’s company should invest in the updating of every section as well as data and processes technology and software. through the analysis of the manufacturing process, the company can take a clear approach towards the best way to improve not only the process but also de final result. some of the main problems that manufacturing companies face are the waste of material due to disorganized processes and the lack of real-time process checkings. this can be solved with specific software and machines that can turn paperwork into the digital era and that will reduce the time employees take on that, being this time better apply to control the production process and communication among different sectors of the company, the product will be made in shorter time with better quality and more profit