The first four lines of sonnet 29 could be paraphrased as
when, in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes,
i all alone beweep my outcast state,
and trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,
and look upon myself, and curse my fate,
o when i make a fortune and don't know what to do with it
when i think about how much i miss my beloved
o when i get into a fight with my friends and we curse one another.
when i sit alone and feel sorry for myself and my bad luck

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

why do i not wanna answer this

“yesterday’s the past, tomorrow is the future, and today is a gift, that’s why we call it a ”

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i dont know doing this for points