Read this conclusion of an argumentative essay.

our national parks are special. most people know that, but there are a few who still have not gotten the memo. those individuals need to understand that there are a lot of benefits we get by taking care of those places. they need to get out of their houses and take a few vacations in those parks. catch sight of some deer or some wolves or some bears. go camping and pick some wildflowers. pretty soon they will see how much better nature is than their television set.

this conclusion could be more successful if the writer revised by

adding a new claim and generating good reasons.

adding more reasons and credible sources.

adding more transitions and creating a more respectful tone.

adding more evidence and a few more transitions.

What evidence from the radio broadcast the war of the worlds supports theme that human vanity can cause problems

If a text made the claim that act iv was the most important act in the entire play, what evidence could you find to prove the accuracy of that claim? list one piece of evidence from the text to support that claim.

Which line in this excerpt from the great gatsby by f. scott fitzgerald contains a simile? about half way between west egg and new york the motor-road hastily joins the railroad and runs beside it for a quarter of a mile, so as to shrink away from a certain desolate area of land. this is a valley of ashes—a fantastic farm where ashes grow like wheat into ridges and hills and grotesque gardens where ashes take the forms of houses and chimneys and rising smoke and finally, with a transcendent effort, of men who move dimly and already crumbling through the powdery air. occasionally a line of grey cars crawls along an invisible track, gives out a ghastly creak and comes to rest, and immediately the ash-grey men swarm up with leaden spades and stir up an impenetrable cloud which screens their obscure operations from your sight.