How should new ideas be handled in paragraphs

Hi,

When you want to introduce a new idea in a paragraph, you always need to conclude the idea/subject you were previously discussing. To do that, just put down your final thoughts and then close it up with a period. Usually when beginning a new idea, you can leave an indent like this:

You would start a new thought by explaining first what your topic is. To learn more about Outlines, visit BrainPOP and watch their video about Outlines.

- I hope this was helpful for you! :D

- "the die is cast; i have consented to return if we are not destroyed. thus are my hopes blasted by cowardice and indecision; i come back ignorant and disappointed. it requires more philosophy than i possess to bear this injustice with patience. i have lost my hopes of utility and glory; i have lost my friend."

the pronoun reference replaces a noun, but you have to make sure there's no room for confusion.

in the first sentence "her" could be referring to shely or to the sister. the answer there is "shelly called her sister and told her about the new baby."

in the second sentence "it" could be referring to the roof or the floor. the answer there is "since the roof leaks on the family room floor, we need to repair the roof."