Fourscore and seven years ago, our fathers brought forth on this continent a new nation, conceived in liberty, and dedicated to the proposition that all men are created equal. -abraham lincoln, gettysburg address, 1863 in the gettysburg address, what does lincoln accomplish by referring to the declaration of independence? a. he sets free all of the people living in slavery in the south. b. he shows his outrage that the southern states have not already ended slavery. c. he reminds people that the united states was founded on the principle of freedom for all people. d. he questions whether the founding fathers were correct to give rights to all people.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.