Hey guyss free points! Can you guys tell me what you think? I just wrote this yesterday and I want your honest opinion lol. ^-^ Thank you! Volcanic Ocean

This is how I feel every day and night,
It's always the same fight.
I feel like a volcano, and I'm going to explode.
Believe me, I'm trying not to implode.
But, it's hard, so hard, cause I'm the ocean.
And, I'm fighting off these waves off deep emotion.
So, I put on my smile and laugh it off.
I never tell anyone when I'm gonna go off.
Off the edge, endlessly falling.
Tell me, can you hear me calling?
I guess not.
My eyes are forever bawling.
Yea, I feel like a volcano, and I'm going to explode.
Believe me, I'm trying not to implode.
But, it's hard, so hard, cause I'm the ocean.
And, I'm fighting off these waves of deep emotion.
I feel like I'm dying.
I just can't stop crying.
Please, oh please, give me the cure.
I want to feel secure.
But, even I know, there is no cure.
I can't be fixed so, I push down the crave to be saved.
I really need to stop this rave.
But, first know that I am a volcano.
And, I'm going to explode.
I can't stop it, this time I'm going to implode.
It's hard, so hard, cause I'm the ocean.
Fighting off waves of emotions.
This time, I don't smile.
No, I don't laugh it off.
I walk towards the edge, and I fall off.