Could someone tell me if this is correct. They have to be either in preterite or imperfect.

All of that is correct remember to read it allowed and think if it makes sense

Some of them turned out badly, I'll correct you

No sé que te dierano sé que te diera,por una mirada, el mundo,por una sonrisa, el cielo,por un beso,ay, no sé que te diera por un beso.veo la lunaveo la luna y la luna ve a mí,que dios bendiga la lunafound the answer in that link. if its wrong just delete my answer so you get your points bck.

Can you do it again i can't really read it