Whos is rap verse is better mine or a guy who thinks he's some professional rapper: mine:
yo, look,
i've got my eyes closed, then they say god forgives but i don't, use to have a heart then i got mine broke, that's bridge burnt,
im sitting in the fumes im breathing light smoke, all these mothers burying there son, i wish mine dont,
Let me be, voices in my head they just won't let me sleep, locked myself away because my demons get the best of me, imprisoned in my head, i'm begging please just let me free, lonely in a crowd of people, people just dont let me see,
coats on in the summer, but my hearts frozen from my past encounters. If you dont like my pain then dont complain if you don't like how im sounding,
i need a business with a personal account, coz im addicted to the graft a victim of my past,
i’ve got some trust issues, even shadows leave you in the dark.

the guy said he's rapper, so apparently he's some super rich guy or something
anyway here's his verse:
You be talkin big actin small

My bars flow like the water, yet they fire

My bars got range, like a sniper

My bars vicious like the snake you call a viper

dancing around, making you hyper

Ay, you cant take this

Dont get too delirius

Im like bellatrix dead sirius

Ay, cant take this? I bring it~

You never could win never had a chance
I walk down we meet again
I roast you and toast I have the right to boast
You can't win that type of thinking is a sin lets begin
Ay.

so which one is better