In the late 1800s, a politician named Ignatius Donnelly wrote a book entitled Atlantis, the Antediluvian World. Donnelly strongly believed that Plato’s description of Atlantis was historical fact, not fiction. In this book, Donnelly claimed to use his expertise in zoology and geology to locate Atlantis. According to him, it could be found west of the Strait of Gibraltar, in the Azores Islands. He believed these islands were actually the peaks of the mountains described by Plato and the myth. How might you vary pacing in this passage for clarity?

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Americans often speak of their country as one of several large regions.  these regions are cultural units rather than governmental units --  formed by history and geography and shaped by the economics, literature and folkways that all the parts of a region share. what makes one region different from another? a region's multicultural heritage as well as distinct demographic characteristics like age and occupation make regions different and special. within several regions, language is used differently and there are strong dialects. there are also differences in outlook and attitude based on geography.