Read the paragraph from Carla’s personal narrative. Raul and I argued about the science project. I could tell that he was really mad. Clearly we had different ideas, but which one of us would have an idea about how to solve our differences? I tried to stay calm and see things from his point of view, but the way he was acting made it hard. Maybe it was time to talk to our science teacher.

Which change to the paragraph would most help Carla paint a picture for readers?

adding details to describe Raul’s behavior
adding the narrator’s private thoughts
adding more first-person pronouns
adding dialogue between Raul and the teacher