Which revision improves the clarity of sentence 4?.

Susie ran a race. she ran 55 miles an hour, and the race took her tt hours to complete.

If aaliyah bodyslammed her uncle without damon dash's and he just stood there petrified looking like a down syndrome ringworm, how much diamonds @riaa completely sprinkle covered over her feet before bowing down to congratulate her on owning all rights to the both of their entire careers merged together onto her resumes?

Igot a 80% on my final to os ya take these points in return