What you think of my song I made please be honest!! Please give it 1 out of 10 maybe decide what i shuld fix :) One who is born with more with the power to wield a sword.
a battle of destiny, and It will not tether me.
With the power of fate and it's a final fight of hate
life and death and you may call it a disgrace but I know what I do is right
so I fight for my life and i will not stay to be left behind
and I will be a man to sing my story and song, and as you may know it to follow along
a man's life without pain might as well be called lame
and as much as I fight in memory of my family I might as well finish it all

A bloody battle full of what makes sense and what matters
I'll never step behind to leave what I've fought
If my battle is encountered with overwhelming power
I still don't think I've lost
Its a battle of reality
And no one knows who is worthy
to be the last one to remain
I am waiting for one to make their mistake and I will overcome, for I'll fight to be great!

As a fallen warriors worry breaks in the dawn
So our true strength rises to the top
As one who lives in what is wrong
I won't allow it and I won't die alone
My bloodline's strength flows through my veins
even if i don't have family
I'm reaching out to the pinnacle of humanity
We're fighting against a new god
One who controls all
So I fight whats beyond my power

A bloody battle full of what makes sense and what matters
I'll never step behind to leave what I've fought
If my battle is encountered with overwhelming power
I still don't think I've lost
Its a battle of reality
And no one knows who is worthy
to be the last one to remain
I am waiting for one to make their mistake and I will overcome, for I'll fight to be great!