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your final persuasive essay should be five paragraphs. you will also submit your planning documents, a rough draft and your final draft.
make sure you have included in your final draft:
• a hook.
• a clearly stated claim.
• logical reasons with supporting evidence.
• a conclusion that sums up your argument and includes a call to action.
• vivid language.
• a tone and voice appropriate for your audience.
• evidence of revision of your reasons and evidence to support original claim if needed, organization of information, transitions, grammar, and mechanics.
review the grading rubric to make sure you are turning in your best work.

As with most formal essays, the three-paragraph essay begins with an introduction paragraph. Such paragraphs must, obviously, introduce the reader to your idea and, in most cases, convince the reader that this essay is worth reading. To craft a strong introduction, be sure to open with a solid hook. You want to draw in readers so they are compelled to engage with your writing.

A hook can be something compelling such as a question, a powerful quote, or an interesting fact. Introduction paragraphs also usually contain background information that assists the reader in understanding your topic, perhaps defining it or explaining an important part. Finally, you want to include a thesis statement. Even though your essay only has three paragraphs, there still needs to be a purpose to the writing.

You could structure your introduction paragraph according to this outline:

Introduction Paragraph

Hook: Is there no solution for dumping waste in the ocean?

Background Points

Explain why trash is dumped in the ocean

Statistics about dumping trash in the ocean

Thesis Statement: Dumping waste in the ocean is a problem because it spells disaster for the ecosystem, leading to problems on land.

This structure is not mandatory, though it might be useful in the long run for organizing your thoughts.

Paragraph Two: Body

The second paragraph, as we have discussed, is the one and only body paragraph. This paragraph bears the burden of communicating support for the thesis statement all on its own. As such, it may take more than one rough draft to get this paragraph to communicate everything you want it to.

Your body paragraph needs to underscore the thesis statement. Create a topic sentence for this body paragraph that communicates this and also transitions from the introduction into the body. For example, your body paragraph topic sentence based on the outline above could be:

One of those problems might play itself out as food scarcity where humans live.

This topic sentence reiterates the thesis and moves the reader into a body paragraph that contains a supporting point: that damage to the ocean’s ecosystem could lead to food scarcity. Within the body paragraph, you can quote different sources that support this point.

Again, this paragraph does not have room to contain everything that a full five-paragraph essay might. But that doesn’t mean you can’t fit in some strong evidence to convince your reader to see your perspective, such as is accomplished through quotes and analysis. Don’t forget to end with a strong transition sentence to move the reader seamlessly into the conclusion.

Paragraph Three: Conclusion

The final paragraph in an essay is usually the conclusion. The three-paragraph essay is no exception. In this essay, the conclusion can be just as long as the other two paragraphs, and it can drive home the point made in the thesis statement and body paragraph. As with most conclusion paragraphs, this paragraph ought to restate the thesis in different words. It should then summarize what was stated in the body paragraph before challenging the reader in some way, whether in thought or action.

Editing Before Turning It In

One thing to be sure of in this type of essay (as in any other) is to polish it. Make it flow well. In other words, revise it!

Why Should Medical Marijuana Be Legal Everywhere

In 9 states marijuana is legal for recreational use and 31 one states it legal for medical use. Some reasoning why it should be legal everywhere is for one it’s used for medical treatment. Another reason is people will end up with it anyways. Lastly in some states it’s legal. Now all the party poopers may say “People will over use it”. Another thing that they may say is “how people under the influence may hurt others.” Well maybe it wouldn’t hurt for it to be legalized.

Marijuana is used for medical treatments. People depression, bipolar disorder, ADHD, anxiety and many other issues can get it. Even if it’s not legal people will still have a way to get it. People would travel to states where it's legal and stock up on it and then sell it. In 9 states its legal for recreational use and 31 states its legal for medical use. In California they have parades for 4/20. Although there are many advantages you have the people who take the fun away with their opposing thoughts.

The party poopers would say “the consumer would overuse it.” There are rules on how much you get so that solves that problem. They also may say “People could harm others or themselves while under the influence because if they drive they have a slight vision loss which can lead them into getting into a wreck.” There are going to laws and rules on what you can do while under the influence. Its safe for people around them and for themselves.

In conclusion Marijuana should be legal. It's used for medical treatment. Another reason is that people would end up with it anyways. Lastly in 9 states marijuana is legal for recreational use and 31 one states it legal for medical use. People may go against it because it can hurt others and people over use it. In reality people will have rules to follow while under the influence.

Here is a rough draft for mine it has spelling errors but ill comment the edited version

The Final Draft

Why Should Medical Marijuana Be Legal Everywhere

In 9 states marijuana is legal for recreational use and 31 one states it legal for medical use. Some reasoning why it should be legal everywhere is for one it’s used for medical treatment. Another reason is people will end up with it anyways. Lastly in some states it’s legal. Now all the party poopers may say “People will over use it”. Another thing that they may say is “how people under the influence may hurt others.” Well maybe it wouldn’t hurt for it to be legalized.

Marijuana is used for medical treatments. People depression, bipolar disorder, ADHD, anxiety and many other issues can get it. Even if it’s not legal people will still have a way to get it. People would travel to states where it's legal and stock up on it and then sell it. In 9 states its legal for recreational use and 31 states its legal for medical use. In California they have parades for 4/20. Although there are many advantages you have the people who take the fun away with their opposing thoughts.

The party poopers would say “the consumer would overuse it.” There are rules on how much you get so that solves that problem. They also may say “People could harm others or themselves while under the influence because if they drive they have a slight vision loss which can lead them into getting into a wreck.” There are going to laws and rules on what you can do while under the influence. Its safe for people around them and for themselves.

In conclusion Marijuana should be legal. It's used for medical treatment. Another reason is that people would end up with it anyways. Lastly in 9 states marijuana is legal for recreational use and 31 one states it legal for medical use. People may go against it because it can hurt others and people over use it. In reality people will have rules to follow while under the influence.

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