The shift in Canada WW1 and after that year, PLEASE HELP VERY EASY WRITE A PARAGRAPH

World war changed Canada in both a negative and positive way.
Due to the war, Canada has lost people, either they passed away, or got injured.
Canada has left a great remark, because over 600k men and women served in the war, fighting for its nation and the people’s.
Before the war Canada was not a military nation in 1914.
WW1 had an impact on women, because they got the chance to work in industries, as nurses etc; rather than work at home like they did before WW1.
After the war, Canada got new technology and they had a system change in the government.
Overall in my opinion, I think World War 1 led Canada to a better change, and till this day we will always hold the history about the Canadians who fought for us

I DID THIS LAST YEAR, HERE IS MY PARAGRAPH

As events soon proved, Canadians excelled in aerial combat. In providing many members of the Royal Flying Corps, the Royal Naval Air Service and later the Royal Air Force, Canada made a great contribution in this field. More than 23,000 Canadian airmen served with British Forces and over 1,500 died.

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