Most honorable delegates, i recommend that you tell the state leaders that these three weaknesses in the articles of confederation must be addressed. they require a new plan for government. the three greatest weaknesses in the articles of confederation are the following: tell them the first one is a problem because the second one is a great problem because the third one is also a struggle preamble to the u. s. constitution "we the people of the united states, in order to form a more perfect union, establish justice, insure domestic tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general welfare, and secure the blessings of liberty to ourselves and our posterity, do ordain and establish this constitution for the united states of america." this is how i would rewrite this preamble so that other people can understand it.

Most Honorable Delegates,

I recommend that you tell the state leaders that these three weaknesses in the Articles of Confederation must be addressed. They require a new plan for government. The three greatest weaknesses in the Articles of Confederation are the following:

Congress is unable to create taxes.    

National militia that is separate from the states.

The government is not provided with a separate judicial branch.

 Tell them the first one is a problem because Congress is only able to request money from legislatures and if the states decided that they did not want to send any money, Congress would end up being powerless.

The second one is a great problem because Congress can't make the states  pay for what the troops need and the troops often went without shelter and with empty bellies.

 The third one is also a struggle because there is no one who is able to settle the problem in a fair and just way and make sure all the states obeyed the law.

Preamble to the U.S. Constitution

"We the People of the United States, in Order to form a more perfect Union, establish Justice, insure domestic Tranquility, provide for the common defense, promote the general Welfare, and secure the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and our Posterity, do ordain and establish this Constitution for the United States of America."

This is how I would rewrite this Preamble so that other people can understand it.

We the people of the United States, would like to form a more superior Union. A Union that establishes Justice the right way, provides a militia for protection, provides peace within the states, promotes the general welfare of the people, and to secure the freedom and the Blessings of Liberty to ourselves and to those for the generations to come. It would be greatly appreciated if you would make this the Constitution for the United States of America.

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hope this meaning spain btw