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This paragraph has a sentence that does not belong. To find it, read the topic sentence again. Which sentence is not about George Washington? Draw a line through that sentence. (2 points) 2. One of the remaining sentences seems to be out of order. Underline or draw a circle around the sentence that should be moved. Draw an arrow to show where you want it to go. (2 points) 3. Even after the out-of-place sentence is moved, this paragraph needs revisions. Most of the sentences have the same sentence structure. One way to address this is to combine sentences. How could you combine the first two sentences to improve the clarity of the paragraph? (2 points) 4. Adding transitions to the beginning of sentences in the paragraph will also improve clarity. Adding a transition word to the last sentence in the paragraph will help call out that it is the conclusion. What word will improve the flow of the paragraph and better indicate its conclusion?

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