GIVE ME SOME FEED BACK YA'LL!! Share your sales pitch or brochure with a friend, classmate, or a family member. Ask for some feedback. Tell your reviewer to focus on how well the writing fits the task you were given. It should make a good argument about why a customer would want to visit the region you’ve chosen. Your writing should be engaging. Ask the reviewer to check on how well the writing is suited to the target audience—the customers of the travel agency.

After you get feedback about your pitch, write a short, reflective piece about the feedback, including details from your reviewer. Make note of what was good about your pitch, areas that might need improvement, and how you would rework your pitch based on the feedback.

Who loves an adventurous, relaxing, yet educational vacation? Well, I have the place just for you! Japan is a collection of mountainous islands. This brings the adventure in the vacation, you can hike up the mountains and see the other lands from there! How cool is that!?!? The main four islands are Hokkaido, Honshu, Shikoku, and Kyushu. The Sea of Japan separates Japan from these neighbors. The water was an important part of why Japan was such a success, it turns out that the water was used as a barrier from intruders. So you don’t have to worry about your plans getting ruined because of a war. When Shōtoku was in power his first act was to send scholars, artists, and his own Buddhist monks to China. He wanted to get ideas from china which is why they may have similar cultural tastes. One of the things they brought back was Confucianism, which brings us to the relaxing part. Confucianism requires meditation and getting control of your-self, which can be relaxing.