Read the body paragraph from an argumentative essay on Louisiana's economy . 1) To better understand the current state of the economy it is helpful to look at one business as a case study. 2) Five years ago, Paul's Pizza was a struggling restaurant 3) It was suffering in a ways. 4 ) Today, the business has dozens of workers . 5) It has become so profitable the owner recently opened a second location What would be the best way to revise sentence 3?

Change it to a more respectful tone.

Fix the spelling and punctuation errors.

Add vivid imagery or descriptive details.

Maintain the focus in the topic sentence.

Explanation:

the hollywood film industry of 1950 was threatened on several different fronts. television broadcasting was rapidly becoming the dominant entertainment medium in the united states. the paramount anti-trust consent decree requiring separate ownership for production companies and theater chains had gone into effect on 1 january 1950. large numbers of young men and women were marrying, having children, and moving to the suburbs, which affected the viability of downtown first-run movie theaters. foreign revenues were endangered by protectionist tactics including quota systems, high taxes, and blocked funds. finally, the morality and patriotism of hollywood films and filmmakers were under attack from government, religious, and citizens' groups.

explanation:

some people are just against it im not sure but i think everyone deserves to be treated equally i think people have a problem with it because its different and not like everything else i hope this !

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