Can someone shorten this paragraph for me please. The early United States, I believe, was not a land of opportunity or equality. We're not totally there yet, even though we are transitioning to being one. I think of the Royal Colony/ Trustee period when I think of the early United States. I'm dreaming about colonizing Britain. After we were eventually able to achieve our freedom, owing to our ethnocentric ways of thought, we participated in unethical actions. In the south, we adapted and treated slaves terribly. Generational trauma, African American disenfranchisement, and much more have been triggered by us. Free speech was already the first amendment right when the constitution was created.

The early United States was not a land of opportunity or equality. We're not evem there yet, but we are transitioning to being one. I think of the Royal Colony/ Trustee period when I think of the early United States. I'm dreaming about colonizing Britain.(is this part of your assignment? otherwise I dont  know if it is neccasary in making your point.) After we were finaly able to achieve our freedom, owing to our ethnocentric ways of thought, we participated in unethical actions. In the south, we treated slaves terribly. Generational trauma, African American disenfranchisement, and much more have been triggered by us. Free speech was already the first amendment right when the constitution was created(same, I don't

know if this idea is necessary, and it doesn't  really fit into the rest of your paragraph.)    

So, I changed some words and cut some extra ones out. The lines I bolded seem like they are required for your assignment, but if they aren't I suggest you cut them out. Hope that helped :)

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the discoverers and explorers: 1. natives showed jedediah smith the way. 2. william sublette was the first cross it with a caravan. 3.joel walker and his family were the frist settlers to use it. the jumping off point: 1. founded in 1827 near where the missouri river flows into the mississippi. 2. by the 1840's, it was the most popular "jumping off" point for pioneers to stock their wagons with supplies. 3. missionaries from the church of jesus christ of latter day saints attempted to make independence their zion, or holy capital. the route west: 1. the first emigrants to oregon came by ship before the trail was established. 2. ships continued to to travel to oregon even after the overland migrations began, but they were not popular among the pioneers. 3. the fare for a sea journey to oregon was quite expensive--few pioneer families could afford it. i don't know the other three i'm sorry.