Which revision adds a narrative element to a historical essay? including background information that affected actions or events
including detailed information that makes the essay very specific
including new characters and events that support the essay topic
including transition words that make the story flow in order of the events

no

explanation:

not everyone in america is free. it is has always been a unequal society. and yet people come in swarms, in search of better lives. some are brought as children, unaware, unknowing. some arrive and just don’t leave. they build lives, pay taxes, raise families. some enter illegally, fleeing persecution in their home country.

there are many reasons why human beings are so attracted to america, despite its history of bitterness towards immigrants.

there are almost two million immigrants brought to the us when they were children. president donald trump and his collaborators are determined to rid the us of as many undocumented immigrants as they can, and stop others from coming because none of their ancestors were immigrants.

america has so many things and yet it lacks the one thing that humanity needs to fully thrive. and so this country will not be at peace in itself until it resolves the pain at the heart of slavery, attacking immigrants, and crumble the rights of those with less power.

the people resposnsible for the advancement of telvision are

at& t bell labs   they made high quality tv  

it shape america today in goods wys and on goods ways

pros are it the watcher open creatiity in there mind and get creative ideas

cons it the watcher get lazy making them just want to watch tv not get excerise and sit around