Curfews have been used effectively in many towns to reduce crime. High school sophomore Mandy Jenkins says, "My parents don't really make me follow the curfew." Some towns report lower crime rates simply because of the location (such as a rural community ).
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the us constitution is a living document, meaning that it can be changed over time as the country changes.

booker t. washington was an educator who established the tuskegee institute. washington argued that african americans should learn trades that would offer them the opportunity to be progressive citizens. instead of fighting against discrimination, washington argued that african americans should use their education and knowledge to become self-sufficient in american society and not in competition with white americans.

w.e.b du bois was the founder of the niagara movement and later the naacp, du bois disagreed with washington. he argued that african americans should consistently fight for racial equality.

ida b. wells was a journalist who wrote about the horrors of lynching in the south. wells work could be considered muckraking as it led to the development of the anti-lynching campaign.