3. instructions:
one of your classmates has asked you to her revise a speech that she will be giving about the
importance of family. revise her speech in the following ways:
1. make the speech formal.
2. add instructions to indicate where the visual images should be shown to audience, choosing
images from the ones below. (for example, (show image of fireworks].) be sure to select at least
two of the images, and make sure that they're relevant and .
3. make the details more specific to strengthen the speech. you may add supporting details as
needed, even if you make them up.