Read the paragraph.
[1] thomas paine, a pivotal figure in the american revolution, was born in britain in 1737. [2] when he was in his
mid-thirties, he met benjamin franklin in london. [3] franklin paine move to philadelphia, where he pursued a
career in journalism, he became the editor of pennsylvania magazine. [4] in 1776, paine authored a pro-independence
pamphlet called common sense, which was widely read throughout the colonies.
which sentence should be revised to improve this paragraph's sentence fluency?
sentence 1
sentence 2
sentence 3
sentence 4

The correct answer is sentence number 3.

The sentence that should be revised to improve this paragraph's sentence fluency is "Franklin helped Paine move to Philadelphia, where he pursued a career in journalism, he became the editor of Pennsylvania Magazine."

When writing a story, it is very important to consider the fluency of the sentences for better reading and understanding. Otherwise, the readers could get confused or the sentences could sound strange. That is what happens with sentence number 3 and it should be revised and corrected. Never forget to also check grammar and spelling, and always use the proper sources of information.

explanation:

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atman means 'eternal self'. the atman refers to the real self beyond ego or false self. it is often referred to as 'spirit' or 'soul' and indicates our true self or essence which underlies our existence.

there are many interesting perspectives on the self in hinduism ranging from the self as eternal servant of god to the self as being identified with god. the understanding of the self as eternal supports the idea of reincarnation in that the same eternal being can inhabit temporary bodies.

the idea of atman entails the idea of the self as a spiritual rather than material being and thus there is a strong dimension of hinduism which emphasises detachment from the material world and promotes practices such as asceticism. thus it could be said that in this world, a spiritual being, the atman, has a human experience rather than a human being having a spiritual experience.

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