Asap damon is writing an essay evaluating andrew carnegie’s contributions to american society. damon has to done research on the topic and arrived at his conclusion. he drafts the following thesis: andrew carnegie’s contributions were mostly positive for america. what might damon’s teacher say about his thesis statement? how could he write a better thesis statement?

julius caesar turned the roman republic into the roman empire by coming in and taking the "dictator" role during the time of a civil war (elites vs lower classes) winning battles and reputation, then declaring him dictator for life

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i think the answer is d. good luck.

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