Read the paragraph that tamar wrote.
in conclusion, the industrial revolution resulted in great growth for the united states. it is true that the industrial revolution
had some drawbacks and disadvantages. but the advances in industry, communication, and transportation far outweigh any
problems. people should stop focusing on the bad stuff and notice all the good that came from it.
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in conclusion, the industrial revolution resulted in great growth for the united states
it is true that the industrial revolution had some drawbacks and disadvantages.
but the advances in industry, communication, and transportation far outweigh any problems.
people should stop focusing on the bad stuff and notice all the good that came from it.
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