Read this excerpt from the body paragraphs of an informative essay. the secret service guards government leaders and protects money. the agency also investigates financial crimes. how could this excerpt be improved as the writer revises the essay? the writer could focus on a different federal agency instead. the writer could include more details and factual support. the writer could add a statement that sets up the topic. the writer could add a summary to restate the topic.

The correct answer is “The writer could include more details and factual support.”

Indeed, the body paragraphs of an essay develop each one of the ideas or theses announced on the introduction. For this they need to include details that further explain each one of the ideas announced in the introduction and factual support that confirms such ideas.

the writer could add more details and factual support

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the industrial development of cities in the ruhr area in the nineteenth century is described. the research was based on english and german language sources. several factors that shaped growth and paths of the cities were categorized and analyzed. they are locations, resources, traditions, entrepreneurs, and technological developments. locations and resources were the most important among them; other factors may be regarded as consequences from locations and resources. among the cities, bochum, essen, gelsenkirchen, and dortmund had the richest resources and most favorable locations in the transportation network and grew to be the largest cities in the ruhr area near the end of the nineteenth century. riverside location was also a favorable factor for the development, as shown in the development of duisburg on the confluence of rhine and ruhr. resource distribution can explain the rise of textile industry, metallurgical industry, and coal and iron industries, and the northward progression of the mining industry. tradition was an important factor for cities such as krefeld, barmen, elberfeld, solingen, and remscheid, which experienced development based on their traditions through the nineteenth century. various entrepreneurs exerted influences within and beyond the local level over the ruhr area. technological development stimulated the northward progression of the mining industry and the deep connection between the coal and the iron industries.