Can somebody read this and tell me your opinion on my paper before I submit it? Please.

Really good but just add a little more detail.

Explanation:

answer; hepatitis a& b can be passed through breast milk; (true);

one time i was looking at my neighbors screen door to see if the door was open i was squinting like a fool for 10 minutes before realizing he was starring back i then died from embarrassment and am now typing this from the ghost world