Please review your speech and write a critique of your performance.

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i always feel really bad when i see a question that nobody has answered, forcing the one asking to guess and get a lower grade. so remember everyone, don't just find answers to your question... answer some too

precisely the author keeps the interest of readers not describing clearly the   kind of relationship in giselle's family. by doing this, readers had to imagine and assume how it was.   instead, the author described better scenes with dark star and the influence of books about horses in giselle's life and actions.   also the fact that she broke her arm but not referring to it in detail leads the readers to imagine and guess what could have occurred.