Read this example of a student’s draft. when alice encounters the flowers in the garden, she is surprised by their ability. moreover, lewis carroll writes that she is shocked by the flowers’ harsh criticism of her. she does her best to appeal to her new companions by asking, "how is it you can all talk so nicely? ” with the hope of getting "into a better temper by a compliment.” which idea is supported with the example and quotation in this analysis? alice tends to say offensive things to the people in the looking-glass land. alice has a difficult time communicating with the other characters in the book. most of the characters alice meets in looking-glass land are quite rude. the flowers of the garden prefer being left alone to talking to alice.

Read this excerpt from rudolfo anaya’s essay “take the tortillas out of your poetry.”tortillas and poetry. they go hand in hand. books nourish the spirit, bread nourishes our bodies. our distinct cultures nourish each one of us, and as we know more and more about the art and literature of the different cultures, we become freer and freer. . i don’t know anyone who doesn’t like to sample different ethnic foods, the breads of many many groups; just as many of us enjoy sampling books from different areas of the world. i travel to foreign countries, and i know more about myself as i learn more about my fellow human beings. censorship imposes itself in my path of knowledge, and that activity can be justified by no one.which of these changes would make this excerpt more argumentative? using words that affect the audience’s sense of trustusing less repetition of certain words and phrasesincluding words that address logic and reasonincluding words that are charged with emotion