What is the “bad trouble” that happens in the valley of ashes?

The "bad problem" in the valley of the ashes is that Myrtle is run over and killed in the Valley of the Ash by the car that held Gatsby and Daisy.  Daisy was driving the car, though Gatsby was willing to take the blame to protect her.

Myrtle being killed by Daisy is a more extreme case of the rich conquering the poor. Daisy is a wealthy woman who lives in East Egg surrounded by others with the same fortune as her, while Myrtle lives in misery in the Valley of the Ashes.

he is honest with congress and america about the difficulty of the war ahead.

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1. the details that would clarify the authors purpose for writing would be after the "haley collected used soccer jersey and sent them to guatemalan children." part, he would say, "and you can also donate today to save ". so far in the text, you can see no such thing. if, near the end the author persuades you to donate to guatemalans, then you know that the author's reason to write is to persuade you.

2. what details would make the text more engaging is to see the guatemalan children's reaction to getting free jerseys.

3. the details that convey the author's attitude would be an opinion by the author, for example, if he said, "haley was a very nice girl " or, you can find the attitude by finding parts of haley's personality that he highlights. you can strengthen your tones by using more descriptive words, and simplify long sentences as much as you can.

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