Hey, i'm doing a assignment for a poem, i was wondering if someone could proof read it, ! here's what it says: for this assignment, you will write an original poem. your poem should • use rhyme scheme or meter. • use at least two examples of figurative language, including (but not limited to) simile, metaphor, or allusion. • be written in a form that is appropriate given the topic you select. and here's the poem! the wind, it’s everywhere, but not visible it spreads so far, from east to west, but is not divisible roaming in the atmosphere, as light as a feather can change your temperature, or maybe the weather how cold can it be? how hot will it get? what you do unto thee, it will give back to whom it met you cannot see it, but hear it, and feel it it sometimes makes you squint, as it gushes against your eyes it’s friends with the sun, the moon, and the skies but don’t underestimate its power, it sometimes can cause terrible things like tornadoes, or hurricanes, like katrina, or harvey, don’t mess with what it flings

Which excerpt from the war of the worldseffectively reveals how the author relates the climax of the narrative through the narrator's thoughts? the war of the worldsall this had happened with such swiftness that i had stood motionless, dumbfounded and dazzled by the flashes of light. had that death swept through a full circle, it must inevitably have slain me in my surprise. but it passed and spared me, and left the night about me suddenly dark and unfamiliar.and then, with a renewed horror, i saw a round, black object bobbing up and down on the edge of the pit. it was the head of the shopman who had fallen in, but showing as a little black object against the hot western sun.at that time it was quite clear in my own mind that the thing had come from the planet mars, but i judged it improbable that it contained any living creature. i thought the unscrewing might be automatic.my mind ran fancifully on the possibilities of its containing manuscript, on the difficulties in translation that might arise, whether we should find coins and models in it, and so forth. yet it was a little too large for assurance on this idea. i felt an impatience to see it opened.