Read paragraph 3. what could kevin do to make it stronger?
a)mention more detail about space
b)delete the first sentence
c)use newton's first name
d)start a sentence with words other than ”he.”

because of all the immigration, america became one big melting pot. the diversity of cultures from all over the world made america somewhat divided as well. people that immigrated stayed with their kind, and their traditions, while native born americans stayed with their kind and their traditions. normally, people born in american scorned the immigrants as well. the new religions also divided america. in summary, it took away from the american culture and identified america as the "melting pot."

it makes the person recieving the message not feel comfortable with the banana