Which step is not required to revise a passive sentence?

Hamlet: ] it will but skin and film the ulcerous place, whiles rank corruption, mining all within, infects unseen. confess yourself to heaven; repent what’s past; avoid what is to come; and do not spread the compost on the weeds to make them ranker. —hamlet, william shakespeare what is the central motif in the passage? the passage of time madness disease and decay gardening

What makes the literal, word-for-word translation of “the metamorphosis” hard to read

Whos a good poet to listen to? i got back into shane koyczan and i'm wondering if anything else is out there.