Body paragraph - 4 to 5 sentences 2nd body paragraph 4 to 5 sentences conclusion 3 - 4 sentences

Hey there,

So I was told in the Pm's to right a paragraph about "how being positive helps improve your achievements.

Body paragraph - 4 to 5 sentences.

I think that being positive can help you achieve things better because you have a positive view on things. When you dont have a good view, you confidence start's to come down. And when this happen's, this could lead to be depressed. As you become positive, you will feel happier, be optimistic is healthy, you don't feel as stressed and worried. 

2nd body paragraph 4 to 5 sentences 

I read a book of people who are positive and people who are negative. I learned that people who are positive are better in the life. They feel alot happier. And one thing is also. when being positive in your life, you will accomplish more because your mind is more determined to do what you are focused on. If you are not positive, you would not be focused and you will most likely not accomplish it.

conclusion 3 - 4 sentences

Everyone should always be positive. If everyone were to be positive, everyone would have great accomplishments and everyone would be alot happier with there life. But as for the opposite, there are not. So by have a good view on matters, we would have a better view on things and become accomplished

I hope this helps you!

~Jurgen

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