Read the conclusion from a personal narrative. even though we were lost in the desert for several hours, we made it home safely, because we had packed extra food and water. our families were very relieved to see us alive and well. which sentence, if added, would make the best revision of the conclusion? “where is the main trail? ” i asked while searching the map. after surviving those miserable hours in the desert, i learned the value of being prepared. my friends invited me to go for a hike, and although it was a hot summer day, i agreed to go, because i had nothing else to do. “be sure to drink some water,” tara reminded us.

subject: why anyone can be a genius.

occasion: moving forward in life.

audience: average person

purpose: to push you further in life

speaker: many famous geniuses.

here is the poem:

here is thy, and here is thee, genius is for what he can be.

poem is a matter of rhyme, but like ben frank said, life is a matter of time.

we have great inventors such as thomas edison, who said, "genius is one percent inspiration and 99% perspiration." no, no perspiration as what comes from your skeleton.

we have great minds, from places of all kinds, such as yu kaw la chi tie, (now im switching languages because yu kaw was japanese.)

てちハラスイヒイス, てちラスイヒイス

てちのちみスイヒイス.

you are a genius, well not yet, but you are capable, and that is a bet.