Analyze the given paragraph, and write, in the table below, your comments pertaining to its problems with the following elements, and also include your suggestions for finding solutions to these problems. unity and coherence
transitions to link sentences to one another
topic sentence
supportive evidence
The Paragraph
Throughout history both Africans and African-Americans have faced oppression and discrimination. Hughes emphasizes the events of the past and the present. Ancient Egypt is contrasted with modern America—the pyramids and the Woolworth Building. The extreme violence of racism is described in the atrocities committed in the Belgian Congo and in Hughes’ time with a lynching in Texas. So, individuals have suffered across time.

answer: my favorite subject is choir

explanation: it is choir becuase you can sing and have fun singing at the same time with your friends.

there is a sequence and logical steps to give an answer of a trouble.

1) strategy is necessary to develop an project idea.

2) to study and know the environment where you are going to work ( ecosystem).

3)   the materials resources to built the ideas.

4) to give a priority order in the context that you study. in this case human needs.

i think it is who. im not sure to be honest

sentences vary by structure as well as by function. there are compound, complex, and compound-complex sentences.

simple sentence

i like to read.

a simple sentence has one independent clause.

compound sentence

i like to read, and i also like to write.

a compound sentence includes more than one independent clause, connected by a coordinating conjunction (and, but, for, nor, or, so, or yet).

complex sentence

i prefer to read books that are bestsellers.

a complex sentence includes one independent clause and one or more dependent clauses. (a dependent clause is one that cannot stand alone.) types of dependent clauses include relative clauses (i kicked the boy who pinched me), adverb clauses (i am going home now because i have a curfew), and noun clauses (i don't know what to do next).

compound-complex sentence

although i prefer to read current bestsellers, i do like to read old agatha christie mysteries, and i also like some 20th-century science fiction.

compound-complex sentences take a bunch of clauses (multiple independent clauses, and one or more dependent clauses) and toss them together like a salad. although these sentences take practice to write in a grammatically correct fashion, they can hold a tremendous amount of meaning, and are common in academic writing.