Feedback on poem Loneliness is like being lost in a maze.
You don't know how to escape.
Loneliness is two ships passing at night.
They see one another but don't talk.
Loneliness is like the arctic sea.
Cold and no land insight
Loneliness is an abandoned ship.
Your the ship just sitting there in the sea
Loneliness is like a shadow.
That follows you everywhere you go.
Loneliness is like a prison with no walls.
you have freedom, but you have no one to talk to
Loneliness is like space.
A void with only darkness.
Loneliness is like a dark cloud.
Always raining never leaves you alone.
Loneliness.

try to do soaps tone.

s-subject

o-occasion (the reason the author wrote the poem)

a-audience (who is this poem mostly for)

p-purpose (was it to convince, inspire, etc. the audience)

s-speaker (can be the author or another character, like is a child, adult, woman, elderly, animal narrating the poem)

tone- the mood the reader gets from this poem

mood- the mood the author had with their own poem

meaning- what do you think the meaning is?

message- what is the author trying to explain to the audience? like what is the theme?

if you still don't get it try showing everyone the poem so they could unravel it

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