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depression
every since my friend left
It has been like a rock
on my back holding me down
until I can't move any more
It's like stepping into a dark and terrifying alley with no idea what awaits you.
it's like you in the middle of the ocean, and there is no land in sight
it's like being punched in the middle of the day randomly
not knowing when the next hit will come
but in the end, they all say the same thing
THEY SAY THAT HOPE IS HAPPINESS.
that's hope is An eternal flame
but that never helps
depression is a Shadow
following you everywhere you go
you cant rid of it
only when your turn on the light
it hides waiting for the next time that your lights turn off
depression is like being Trapped on a Desert Island
The heat keeps burning; I need water. One drop of water is the hope
I have been waiting the drop never came
instead, the ocean came
The ocean is a mighty beast
ok yes thanks for asking I am ok
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