Can someone rewrite this to make it more formal and add punctuation to it? I'll give you extra points and brainliest.

At Lego, little girls knows exactly what they want to be when they grow up. That's the Lego Creator. Over the years, she has been trying to collect as many Legos as possible to create more designs. In college, she made several creations using Lego, including a farm. In 1984, Lego saw Francine's building and hired her. She was so happy that she finally got the dream job she had wanted since childhood. The Lego company. There's a new manager and they're so inspired that thousands of children, art students, engineers, architect's and others wanted to know how she got to such an important role. This story is very impressive because she had tried several times to apply for Lego but finally got accepted. So try to do something new and don't stop believing in yourself, because one day it will all pay off.

It appers to already be quite formal and properly punctuated, why does it need to be further refined?

Explanation:

is there a passage to this question if so plz take a picture

i think she wanted to protect her children from the extreme racism of the american south.