From your reading of the first 12 chapters of Pride and Prejudice, what do you notice about Austen’s diction, or word choice? How does Austen’s use of language affect your comprehension of the text?

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

i think   they were arguing over whether they would get info from doing it or nit was invading privacy